Wow... I didn't expect it to end that way... well done...

oh i do like this one a lot too, 'cause the boy and the dream poem was one of my faves that you did and i love this one 'cause it's like a continuation. i like how you wrote him as being set free by his sister and it seems like he would've prefered to die that way than in battle or something. good job!

Cool. I like it. I like the ending a lot.
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The Great, the Mighty, the Orc King