| Reviews for Romantic Medley |
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Melancholy Butterfly 6/28/04 . chapter 1First off, let me applaud you for your wonderful word choice. Each line of the haiku portrays a very intriguing persepctive of love, and the haiku simply conveys a great sense love and yet also conflict. "Hispid embraces", a most interesting line, the word "hispid" I have never heard of until redaing this haiku :) |
Mitsunaga 6/15/04 . chapter 1very clashing conflict and such makes me all ambivilant inside. Adherant to the saying "Good art poses questions" |
AntiPleasure 4/10/04 . chapter 1Nifty words, haven't seen a well done haiku for a while. Hehe. Good work! Jenna xx |
breakdown in the waiting room 3/17/04 . chapter 1"Hypcrite and caregiving." Like my parents. "Empathy fever." Such awesome lines! -Jessica |
kamikaze899 3/4/04 . chapter 1write more! i love the wordiness... and i totally agree with this.. keep writing! _ |
godawful teen-angst poetry 2/16/04 . chapter 1mm you my dear are amazing. ahh you need to write more of these. doule entendres and whatnot. which is really clever due to the subject. last line is perfection perfected...sorry for lack of sense-making? lyv |
Plato's Optic Runaway 2/15/04 . chapter 1MM...the first line instantly programs the hot, sensuous confusion being the very substance of love. And the title amplifies the idea of perlexity, of things so diverse fusing together. Well done! And just in time for Valentine's, what a lovely holiday, sure. |
Lina Inverse 2/15/04 . chapter 1I'm not sure what hispid means... But I like the contrast in the 2nd line |