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Melancholy Butterfly 2004-06-28 . chapter 1
First off, let me applaud you for your wonderful word choice. Each line of the haiku portrays a very intriguing persepctive of love, and the haiku simply conveys a great sense love and yet also conflict. "Hispid embraces", a most interesting line, the word "hispid" I have never heard of until redaing this haiku :)
Mitsunaga 2004-06-15 . chapter 1
very clashing conflict and such makes me all ambivilant inside. Adherant to the saying "Good art poses questions"
AntiPleasure 2004-04-10 . chapter 1
Nifty words, haven't seen a well done haiku for a while. Hehe. Good work!
Jenna xx
breakdown in the waiting room 2004-03-17 . chapter 1
"Hypcrite and caregiving."
Like my parents.
"Empathy fever." Such awesome lines!
-Jessica
kamikaze899 2004-03-04 . chapter 1
write more! i love the wordiness... and i totally agree with this.. keep writing! ^_^
godawful teen-angst poetry 2004-02-16 . chapter 1
mm you my dear are amazing. ahh you need to write more of these. doule entendres and whatnot. which is really clever due to the subject. last line is perfection perfected...sorry for lack of sense-making?
~lyv
Plato's Optic Runaway 2004-02-15 . chapter 1
MM...the first line instantly programs the hot, sensuous confusion being the very substance of love. And the title amplifies the idea of perlexity, of things so diverse fusing together. Well done! And just in time for Valentine's, what a lovely holiday, sure.
Lina Inverse 2004-02-15 . chapter 1
I'm not sure what hispid means... But I like the contrast in the 2nd line ^^
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