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| Fellow Writer 2004-04-22 ch 1, anon. | abusebeautifully written... the imagery was powerful... it reminded me of my own nightmares... |
| MusicalMoonbeam 2004-03-07 ch 1, | abuseVery graphic in a good way! Good use of imagery. I really like: "Freezing the blood in my heated veins And setting my world on fire." The words you chose really fit well. I like! |
| krista 2004-02-13 ch 1, anon. | abusehey buddy, awesome job. great imagry, flowed well, and great word choice. grusome yet very good! |