That's really sad... I really like the last two lines. Keep up the good work!

*chokes up* *bursts into tears* No, seriously, this is really...I love it. It's touching. Like stabwound in chest touching. New style too...awesome. Oh, Happy Valentine's Day! Mwah... let me embarrass you in front of all your fans. ~Beck~

The rhyme scheme confuse me and kinda threw the poem off rythem, but tis still good.
Jaxie

I like it, not gushy. You know how much I dislike that.
Love always,
Raye