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| Joey7691 2004-05-16 ch 1,  | abusei read your poem 'i' and loved it. now...i've read your poem 'book' and loved it just as much, maybe a tiny bit less. i gave you my words and now i tell you from the depths of my heart...you are and always will be a writer. |
| Old Poems 2004-03-10 ch 1, | abuseAnother great poem, on your profile you say you're not good at poetry... I think you should change that lol |
| Bubblewrapped 2004-02-20 ch 1, | abuseGreat poem. I really enjoyed it...reminds me of my own life. In fact, its EXACTLY like my life LOL. I particularly liked the lines "There is nothing, where 'friend' should be". Thanks for reviewing my poem (Butterfly) btw. :) Keep writing! |
| Candi1815 2004-02-14 ch 1, | abuseIt was beautiful it makes me want to look back on my life(even though I don't have that much life to look back on!) |
| chocolatecreme06 2004-02-14 ch 1, | abuseThis seems like a poem you could expand more on. Even still the way it is is powerful in a simple way. Nice job. |
| thiscapturedsky 2004-02-13 ch 1, | abuseVery nice format and I like the simplicity but thoughtful and powerful point. Great poem. |
| tranCendenZ 2004-02-13 ch 1, | abusegreat clincher |