 sportynitemare 2005-02-16 . chapter 1amazing... |
 Infinite Smiles 2004-04-14 . chapter 1I love this. What a positive way to look at things! Yay! It is so true! V-Day is Just another day. There are so many days that have so much potential. thanks for writing this. |
 Dancing Waters 2004-03-07 . chapter 1aw.. made me all tingly with the last stanza and the last line. wonderful.
-love, enat |
 ufpncc1966 2004-02-23 . chapter 1Awesome. The last stanza works wonderfully. Great stuff. :-) |
 Lidless Eye 2004-02-23 . chapter 1Wow, this was very nice, especially the last stanza. The "I love you" was pretty cliche and is kind of old, but the way you used it in here is pretty forgivable. =) Nice job.
~Lidless Eye |
 nine iron 2004-02-21 . chapter 1Wow,I have heard good stuff about you. Your reviews just sing praises. I am new to this and in this dark and horrible world I need someone honest and open. I have read some reviews you have given out and you seem to have good knowledge of the works of a good poet. I would hope you could help me out by giving me the odd helping word or so. Im going back to read all of your 36 works or as many as I can read. I am into very breif short poetry with hard hitting lines and also creating more than imagary, but creating a thaught, targeting the neurochemistry of poety if you will. Hope to hear from you.
Nine Iron |
 nobody in particular 2004-02-21 . chapter 1 b+?
whoa, you dont have high standards, do you?
this is good
write more |
 Silent Star4 2004-02-15 . chapter 1Aww, I love this poem. It's true that people get so hyped over Valentine's day. Anyways, good job! |
 Sarah Parker 2004-02-14 . chapter 1wow, hopeful... not feeling the whole hopeful deal tonight, but it's a good poem nonetheless. |
 larna 2004-02-14 . chapter 1I love this poem, it's so true. The idea is fantastic and is coveyed great. |
 pennydeath 2004-02-14 . chapter 1Exactly. Exactly exactly EXACTLY. You're a genius and the coolest person on the planet because...whoo. This has made me very cheerful. You are being faved, me dear. |
 floofy 2004-02-14 . chapter 1 it's cute. I like the general message.
*applause* |