|Reviews for Bemused|
| Lina Inverse 2/25/04 . chapter 1
Very emotional and well written. I can relate to this one.
| Dark Child 2/14/04 . chapter 1
I love your poetry, it's so emotional.
| Fabian Cortez 2/13/04 . chapter 1
Very Well described piece dealing with the trauma of depression. Pretty accurate rendering there.
| mazasuki 2/13/04 . chapter 1
OOh, I like this a lot. It's very real, not all spiffed up to sound good. About the homework and language...I think it might sound better to say 'the language of failure' instead of 'in the language of failure', but that's just my opinion.