Very emotional and well written. I can relate to this one.

I love your poetry, it's so emotional.

Very Well described piece dealing with the trauma of depression. Pretty accurate rendering there.
Well Done
Keep Writing
F.C

OOh, I like this a lot. It's very real, not all spiffed up to sound good. About the homework and language...I think it might sound better to say 'the language of failure' instead of 'in the language of failure', but that's just my opinion.