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Mystical Jade (too lazy to sign in) -_-* 2004-02-16 . chapter 1
As always, I enjoy your description of what's going on. Very detailed. I really didn't see anything wrong, although grammatically, check your spelling errors (I saw a few word misspelled/letters mixed around). It was a pleasure. ^_^
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