Wow...I think my head is spinning. Anyways, I decided to read some of your poetry...maybe all of it. This is the first poem if read. I like to write about time too. This poem reminds me about a poem by one of my favorite authors E.E. Cummings. I read it just last night actually.

Wow, I really enjoyed this poem. I love the idea of the clock being a slave to time, and then us in return being one to both. That's really awesome!
Thanks for reviewing my work the other day. I look forward to more of yours also!
Yabou

i like it...i really like how u say that death is the one that controls time...it makes me think, and i like that in a poem...
good job
*Arreis Kurai*

this is complicated. watch your it's/its

Impressive; especially the twist at the end. My mind still strains to understand this one, but I know all too well many poems are meant to be ambiguous riddles and so I congratulate you on a job well done.