I found a thread on the forums of xgam.org, which lead to these almost perfect two chapters. I love the style, two main characters, and they're not guys. They're elven chicks =D Ah, now I've realized the last review was sent in like a year ago, so I guess you're not gonna read this...Well, I love the story itself, and the flawless storytelling is what makes this story so hard to stop reading. Even if it was just the beginning, and it's been a LONG time since you last updated it; you just can't stop now. If you ever read this, KEEP ON WRITING.

aha...this story -Fallen Angels..wow!!its so damn good man!!i can't believe it!!its written so interesting!!do u guys copy n paste or u really wrote tat story by URSELF??!!its simple WONDERFUL!!i've nv read such a wonderful story b4!!u guys r GENIUS man!!wow!!i gotta recommend this story to ALL my frens!!they wil regret 4 not reading it!!don't u think so??
everyone there!READ THIS!its v nice!
hahahhahahhahaha..:P

Enjoyable, thus far. A bit 'thick' in the beginning, and a bit 'thin' in the middle, but very stylized. Well written, and I can only hope it goes on. In particular what I hope to see is not less description, but have it broken up just a bit more. Perhaps a bit of set up in the plot development, and I hope to learn more about the characters themselves, but all in good time. The story has just began, and it could go in many directions. I can hardly wait.

lol, Aria. The descriptions were beautiful, I could see the two women perfectly. The tension and the dialogues flowed really well, attitude problems huh? But I can see they'll develope a meaningful friendship, ne? Good job as always!

XD Now I'm hooked on "Yuki" AND this story. Bwhahahaha.
You never cease to amaze me, Aira-sama. Hehehe.
You better put up those chapters in your notebook!! >_O
You and your series fics. So addictive. XD
Write more, my dears. I love. *hearts*

UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE IT!

Just the beginning? I'm sure this story looks very very promising. I like this characterization process very much, you know? Go on like this, Aira and Marcia!
**greets to Marcia in the process**

Okaay, u gotta update 'cuz I's good. And rite now, I'm not in the 'Reading Romance fic' mood. ^.^ but anyway, it's a good start. :)

Hey!
gotta say i'm liking this story a lot. the descriptions are great without being too over the top, the interaction between Chrisenta and Rysta is written really well and i still have no idea what is going on!!
can't wait for the next chapter, so update soon : )
keep writing,
lv JoeyStar x
p.s: interesting that you use 'elve' instead of 'elf', was that on purpose and not just a typo?