Really sweet and I like your song lyrics!
*lime-girl*

I love that story and that song, that song is amazing. You go Jessica! You go Cassie! You go 'Crazy Norman Girl'!

I really like this... one thing... you have "She signed deeply and brought her hand" I think you should have 'sighed.' At first, it's a little confusing, and sad... For example, when she is saying she still didn't have the ring, or the baby... etc... it is a little confusing. You may want to make the past a bit more clear in her explanation. But I love this so far. You are really talented. I also really liked the song lyrics you wrote. Keep writing.