Thats good... of course i like all poems that rhyme cuze i'm so bad at it. rhyming, that is.

I'm not much of a poet, so my review might be as good as kitty litter. *grin*
However, I usually evaluate a poem depending how much it moved me, and this moved me a lot. The subject was original, and the words flowed easily.
Overall, great work. And thanks for the reviews.