   AmandaJoywrites 2008-03-25 . chapter 12loved it, just read it in one sitting. I love how you intertwined zach and ana's points of view. I wish you'd finish it it was GREAT!! your characters really have depth |
 Isabella22 2006-05-02 . chapter 12You must update! I wonder where she's gone...you can't leave me right there! Oh the suspence! Please update soon, love this story!-Betsy |
 Deafgurl's world 2006-04-12 . chapter 12Poor Avery! I dont understand why she left and without say why she leaving. I wonder why Zack wont tell Avery that he's report. I dont understand what's going on. Who's the guy that Avery talk with? Hurry update soon |
 Mrs. MJackson 2005-03-11 . chapter 12okay this story is great but why did you stop, please continue, you can't just leave us hanging like this. |
 Dreamz4h2 2005-03-04 . chapter 1hey isabelle8 great first chapter. just starte reading it. going to carry on reading further now. |
 jules2206 2004-07-31 . chapter 12hey i love this plz updayte! |
 Kezza 2004-07-25 . chapter 12 Great Chapter! Update SOON!! |
 hesfb 2004-06-30 . chapter 11wow i cant believe your writing so many stories all at once- how to you keep up with them all? anyway this is an interesting one- you seem to like the whole damaged person thing (eg Jordan) guess thats cuz it makes in more interesting like gives it another angle... am i right... oh well im probably blathering on so ill stop. :) |
| Kezza 2004-06-17 . chapter 11 Great Chapter!! Update SOON! |
| Kezza 2004-06-17 . chapter 10 Good Chapter! Update SOON!! |
 Asthenia 2004-06-16 . chapter 11yummy!
i really do love zack. can't wait for more ;D |
 anatidaephobiac 2004-06-15 . chapter 11who who who?!
Update soon! |
 incrediblysassy 2004-05-25 . chapter 10uh-oh...oh no!ahahaha...that's good...update soon |
| anatidaephobiac 2004-05-24 . chapter 10 Dr. Henson is cool. Update soon! |
| Asthenia 2004-05-24 . chapter 10 ARGH TOO SHORT! MORE! please?
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