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Not Who I Look Like 2008-11-07 ch 21,	AW! I LOVE IT! U R AMAZING! I can't belive you wrote this, it's so good. No im not kidding, it's like publishable good!
deep.water.diving 2008-06-27 ch 21,	finally a happy ending. Loved it. Your a really great writer, this is practically worthy of being published. Seriously. You're a great writer and I frankly can't stop smiling right now. It is completely awesome and if this was a book in a store i owould definately buy it, no matter the cost. Well...actually i have no money, but if i did i would buy it no matter the cost. Really hope you continue to write, maybe even one more chapter to see what happens. Does Fenix then become king? funky. Really loved it. its sad i'm trying to think of other words to describe it but i can't it's jsut totally awesome and lovely a and makes you want to keep smiling. thoiugh at the same time it was infuriating as you saw things from Aiur perspective and she kept stuffing it all up but at last! a happy ending. ! heh. this is really long. but you deserve it. its awesome! -hails
x3life 2008-01-07 ch 21,	no i wanna know what happends after this!! with how they end up and if they get married and the kingdom overall...
Sun Chime 2007-10-30 ch 20,	Hello! I've apparently reviewed the 21st chapter already, so this is for chapter 20! All that aside, I can't believe it's finished! A beautiful story with a slightly rushed, but apt end. Had to re-read the whole thing to make sure nothing was missed, and now, I could point out a few errors in the earlier chapters, but let's not delve into that, it was written long ago, and all of us make mistakes! I've always loved the story, and still do, but am consumed by a strange sadness that it's over now. Will definitly miss Aiur and Fenix. (ESPECIALLY Fenix...grins) It's been a long two years...strangely, a lot like the story! Now, I'll read Dark Hunter! YAY! It's so hard to let go of a story...but great work on it! Please do let me know if you ever write anything new, on any site, would love to read it! waves!
flipstahhz 2007-10-15 ch 21,	aww k8! YOU SUCK how are ya sis? i sorta avoided this update for a while because i knew it would be the end of this story. it's been a long while since i've read it..and i'm pretty sure i'll go over it again. fantastic conclusion to a spectacular story. hearted it to pieces. take care, sis love flipstahhz ;)
Bloo 2007-10-12 ch 21,	Okay, random conincidence, but I read the story two years ago up to what you had done. And then randomly got back on today, and it was finished! Thank you. Lots. It was a little rushed, but the writing was still wonderful, as always. Especially liked the proposal over Malloy's dead body. I'll be watching for more stories! Loved it!
Hotkitty 2007-10-03 ch 4,	it wont let me review the last chapter. and it was so beautiful that im actualli on the verge of tears. normalli, i hate cheese, & rushedness, & everything being so very... abrupt. but after two years, for this fic, it just... fit. & it deserved a happy ending. no dragging. 'cause there isnt realli anything else left to say. one word. beautiful. & you've cheered me up, just like you always manage to do :P ~naffi
puuuurfect angel 2007-10-03 ch 22,	Wow, I can't believe that you actually finished this! I think I gave up hope for it months and months ago. I'm glad that you did though. It was nice to get an end to the story :) I've been reading this with about 4 hours sleep in me, after a very long and trying day, so I'm going to do my best to give a good review that makes sense! I like the closure you gave to a lot of the characters, although I think (think) that because the Priest didn't pronounce them man and wife, they weren't actually officially married. You need that line to end it all. Or something like that. It's one of the many things that I frequently get told about by grandparents who work in a church, and frequently tune out :p It was nice to see some of the bad guys go down. Malloy especially! Although I have to admit that over the past 2 years I've forgotten most of what went on in the previous chapters of this story, and the whole of the first one. Unforunately, I don't have the time to reread them both right now. And what was really great was to finally see Aiur and Fenix getting together! I think that, despite the time you've taken off from writing this story, you've managed to capture the characters again quite well :) They seem to fit my memories of them almost perfectly. That in itself is one hell of a feat! All in all, great story, great job! I really enjoyed them both, and thank you for ending it :)
cherrypiesizzle 2007-10-02 ch 1,	When I have time...I'll read this...
Lucy Grace 2007-10-02 ch 22,	I officially love this story! After re-reading the end of the first one and the whole of this one to refresh my memory I can definitely say it was worth the wait!
katie valentine 2007-10-02 ch 22,	ah what i'd give to get a guy like fenix? melts the emotions is so real...gosh...this story rocks! XD
Ranting Forever n Rambling ... 2007-10-01 ch 22,	Aw... -sniffle- I'm glad it was a happy ending (and Malloy died, pardon my maniacal laughter at that), but I've been thinking about it for a while. You know, it's hard to end a story. It's done, finished, and there's no more. At least, that's how I feel. Usually people want endings. They want to feel that sense of finality. Ah, I guess it's bittersweet. I'm going to miss Aiur and Fenix. Now you have no more stories you have to finish. But you must have some ideas swirling around in your head, right? Well, Kait, when you decide to write a new story, I'll be eagerly awaiting it. But you must already know that. Until then! ~Ranting a.k.a. Michelle
liz 2007-10-01 ch 22,	Oh, my God. I nearly had a heart-attack when I saw you'd updated this. It's brilliant. I'm surprised you could return to it after so long and just...pick up like you'd never left. Simply amazing. I loved this chapter. It moved so quickly, it was like a roller-coaster. I couldn't believe it when Aiur married Malloy and then when Fenix was unmasked (finally) I was beside myself with fear. I still can't believe she found out that way! The torture Fenix endured was brutal. My heart was in my mouth. But then she came down and told him she loved him and I became insatiably happy and sad at the same time. And then Roanne - she deserved it. I'm surprised that you had Aiur play such a prominent role in Malloy's death, but the more I think about it the more I think it wouldn't have worked any other way. It's justice. And the ending! Thank you so much for ending this happily. You really had me terrified - for years literally - that it wasn't going too. I love this. It's perfect.
Callie Rose 2007-10-01 ch 22,	aw...such a happy ending. Everyone got what they deserved. Thank you for the closure. I really loved this story. And no matter how long you took, you never lost me as a reader. I wish you luck on any projects you work on in the future. And tell me about them, because I am so there. lol. I've been your loyal reader for too long to give up on you. I think it's been four years now. Keep writing. luv, Callie
Desert Illusion 2007-10-01 ch 22,	screams in the library OMG! OMG! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU, AIUR! I CAN'T BELIEVE you finally finished this story! It was a perfect ending, and I couldn't have wished for a better one! hugglez you to death Omg! I'm just so shocked! When I saw your e-mail with nothing but a "grins" I KNEW something was up. So I checked it out asap, and had to rea a couple chapters back to refresh my memory where the story last left off. But good Lord, Aiur! That was one hell of a showdown! I LOVED IT! "Hell and high water wouldn't be able to stop me." Oh, how I adore that line! YAY! FINALLY Molly's dead. I mean FINALLY! How many times have I begged you to kill him off, and he's finally gone! YAY! hugs you again God. You have no idea how happy I am to finally see a closure come to this story. Then again, judging from this review...you may have an idea. hahaha! Oh wow. It's been really long, hasn't it? I miss talking to you! I'm almost finished with college, and then on to Masters, but we'll have to catch up sometime later! My class has been cancelled, and so I'm heading home right now. Take care of yourself, Aiur, and THANK YOU SO MUCH! hugs and kisses Love you! BYE! ~Maha P.S. FP says that I've reviewed for this chapter before, and so it wouldn't let me log on and leave a review...how is that possible when you've finished this NOW!? Dude! Weird people aroud here...

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