this is good

I loved it!

that was nice twist. i love all of ur stories. they always have some kinda twist. never thought I wuld like to read mysterish kinda stories, bit thanks to u now i dod so thanks

Hey! Ok, first of all, I read all the stories you updated, and they were wonderful, you did an awesome job!! This chapter was awesome and the story was beyond briliant, it's one of my favorites. Again great job, and I love your writing, you're very talented at it (^_^)

not exactly what I was expecting for the final chapter, I had thought there would be an epilogue or I hope would be a sequel, and I had thought that Jordan would have gotten together in the end

Great Ending! I really enjoyed this story.

i love it. why did you end it there? such a cliff hanger!! update soon

Wow! i wasn't expecting mark to say that! really awesome story btw.

He killed them?! O no, he wouldn't kill Jordan though, we should hope. Thanks for updating all the stories! Keep up the great work (^_^)

well your grammer in this sucks **...you really need to revise it.
otherwise your story would be wonderful

Great Stuff! I can't wait to find out what happens next! Update SOON!!

Good Chapter! Update SOON!

This story is the best suspense story I've read in quite a while. I'm scared lol...well keep writing and update soon. Thanks for all the quick updates...great job. (^_^)

yay smart jordan saved ppl...
update soon!

oh dear... who was the detective...?!
Update soon!