FictionPress.com - let the words flow
| FictionPress.com - let the words flow |
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| outsidersgirl 2007-10-14 ch 1,  | abusethis is good |
| Writing4Eternity 2006-03-25 ch 20, | abuseI loved it! |
| nightlystar 2005-05-11 ch 20, | abusethat was nice twist. i love all of ur stories. they always have some kinda twist. never thought I wuld like to read mysterish kinda stories, bit thanks to u now i dod so thanks |
| Sesdimona 2004-10-08 ch 20, | abuseHey! Ok, first of all, I read all the stories you updated, and they were wonderful, you did an awesome job!! This chapter was awesome and the story was beyond briliant, it's one of my favorites. Again great job, and I love your writing, you're very talented at it (^_^) |
| pammy 2004-10-08 ch 20, anon. | abusenot exactly what I was expecting for the final chapter, I had thought there would be an epilogue or I hope would be a sequel, and I had thought that Jordan would have gotten together in the end |
| Kezza 2004-10-07 ch 20, anon. | abuseGreat Ending! I really enjoyed this story. |
| unthinkable 2004-08-01 ch 19, | abusei love it. why did you end it there? such a cliff hanger!! update soon |
| Nut 2004-07-31 ch 19, | abuseWow! i wasn't expecting mark to say that! really awesome story btw. |
| Sesdimona 2004-07-26 ch 19, | abuseHe killed them?! O no, he wouldn't kill Jordan though, we should hope. Thanks for updating all the stories! Keep up the great work (^_^) |
| notaboy 2004-07-26 ch 3, anon. | abusewell your grammer in this sucks **...you really need to revise it. otherwise your story would be wonderful |
| Kezza 2004-07-25 ch 19, anon. | abuseGreat Stuff! I can't wait to find out what happens next! Update SOON!! |
| Kezza 2004-06-20 ch 18, anon. | abuseGood Chapter! Update SOON! |
| Sesdimona 2004-06-19 ch 18, | abuseThis story is the best suspense story I've read in quite a while. I'm scared lol...well keep writing and update soon. Thanks for all the quick updates...great job. (^_^) |
| Laur1532 2004-06-19 ch 18, anon. | abuseyay smart jordan saved ppl... update soon! |
| anatidaephobiac 2004-06-14 ch 17, | abuseoh dear... who was the detective...?! Update soon! |