Very interesting. I love fics with magic and stuff in them, but something confused me. How did her parents die and why would someone want them dead? And all i have to say to the demonic chick, don't count your chickens before they hatch! OH MY GOD! I'M SPEAKING LIKE ME ENGLISH TEACHER WITH ANALOGIES! AH! Tis good so far, hope you continue :) i really didn't find anything wrong with it, i really like it

seems lyk a good start! have u eva read tamora pierce books? cuz they have magic in that called the gift too... lol i luv her books! i can almost neva write a long chappie either... i dont kno how those ppl write ones that are lyk 40 pgs long... or how they have that much time... ^.^;;

its a good story so far... gonna go read the next chappie now! ^.^