I like. You HAVE to write some more, I am dying to know what happens! The plot's pretty cool, and I love the AIM chat thingy. By the way, did you know that when she shuts down the computer, it says she's closing gAIM, not AIM? I dunno if you meant to do that, but whatever, just write more please! ok, bye.
PS: You could read my story...

Too much AOL speak on this to really enjoy it. The first chapter was good though but the second chapter was weak. You should put more description in the second chapter. It is not dark enough for my tastes. No, this is not a revenge post on you calling "Darkness From The Skies" a fan fiction when it is not fanfic. Is this really a horror story? For me this is not scary at all.

This sounds like it's going to become a very interesting story...I enjoyed the two chapters you have here so far, and I like how it starts so subtly and normally, in a normal environment. Anyway, update soon and check out some of my work too if you have time...thanks!

*LAUGHS HYSTERICALLY* banta aal the way. i love you steph, you and your crazy.. thing. gayle is a cool name. you used a lot of gender-ambiguous names in this. i love names *schnoogles names*
notice how i treat this like a livejournal where all you do is post stories? weird, huh. if you want anything helpful, you know where to find me.

I am so sorry
that didn't review this ealier.
This was very fun, adding the IMs. Heck, the great writers wrote in letters and diaries, so, why not!
Again, soz!!

AH HAHAHHAhahaha!
Its so realistic I feel like I've known all the characters in person for a while. ;)
I found this story to be very detailed and well written.
I feel sorry for Clive, always being picked on by the class and everyone else. He should fight back from time to time, not be so serious and technical about things all the time, life isn't all about technicalities and rules.
Morgaine seemed to be bored at first, but then her interest seemed to grow and become more focused on Gayle.
Gayle seems to be sort of a "big kid" kind of person, PS2 in a classroom? I thought only my physics teacher did that :P. I wonder why the game "Gayle" was chosen for his character, is there a hidden meaning to it? some meaning or short for something like "Gay Lee"? :P
I'm not sure if the category of horror or suspense fits this story, but I guess I am going to have to wait until chapter 2 comes out.
Keep up the good work, I'll be waiting for some more of the "exciting adventures of Morgaine Scither" :)
Too bad the first chapter was short though :)

I'd like to read more.

Yea, that was so banta lol. But it was a really good story...kinda retold fridays history class. Cya soon!!

i live in NJ too! Anyway, cool story, update. I wanna find out what happens next.

Sounds real, I like it. You've suspended any disbelief I might have had. Please continue, I'd like to read more of this! =D