hey! that was so good! i love! thanks for reviewing my story! Oh, if you like the Mists of Avalon, read the other 3 books in that series (yes it is an actual series) the books are(not in order): The Forest House, the Preistess of Avalon, and the Lady of Avalon. I have read all but one! they are soo good.
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~triya

oh the agony^^ i feel it by just reading, good job, though this should count as fiction?
~Never the same~

Why is FP being so weird? All I see are script pages and weird symbols in stories?
Sorry about the "banta" comment earlier, duh! I remember!!
This is a neat statement, I have felt this way so many times! It is called "reading people" and it is actually a good thig. Lonely, but good!
very cool use of words (is jealous or your talent).
your pal -- JT

I like it...good descriptions of things...but who is "she?"

great idea...thanks!

Aw! Great details and imagery! This sounds like something from a journal; you could lengthen this to be about the story of the girl in this little piece, make it into a diary-format or something =D