 Green-Eyed Genie 2004-03-02 . chapter 1Wonderful imagery, very Greek-orientated and relates very well our position amidst the stars! WELL DONE! |
 Earthsong12 2004-02-29 . chapter 1This is pretty. I love the language. Write more! |
 Pont 2004-02-25 . chapter 1woow, i love this! has to be my fav!
aww poor hon- good thing my compie almost never has problems, or i would go mad. I go insane when my dsl is down, which is every two weeks or so.
I LOVE this! it's beutiful! *searching for words* the imagery! wow! keep up the great work!
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 karmakaze 2004-02-22 . chapter 1Wow...you did this on word pad? I'm amazed.
It's absolutely beautiful, though:) |
 HideAwayFairy 2004-02-15 . chapter 1Very beautifyl. I love how you use mythological characters in your poem. Keep writing! |
 YoungRL 2004-02-14 . chapter 1Wow. o_O That's a good "wow." I really like this. It's.. so... *tries to think of suitable words* elegant, so sophisticated. Your poetic voice is really great, you paint such an amazing picture of a truly beautiful night. Not a run-of-the-mill poem here, mm-mm. *shakes her head*
Your imagery was amazing, too. I love the metaphors you use and the allusion to those mythilogical figures.
Please, write more stuff like this!! =D |