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| Shaun 2004-04-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery entertaining and interesting. I loved the twist at the end. Looking forward to reading more of your work. |
| Kairo Paracelon 2004-03-28 ch 1,  | abuseFinally you posted it for public. But it's an awesome story. |
| Endless Nightmares 2004-03-21 ch 1, | abuseHello- Enjoyable read. It was really long, but very well written. I liked it. |
| Della C 2004-03-03 ch 1, | abuseCute. I enjoy your writing style. it makes me happy. ^_^ |
| Derek Dogan 2004-02-28 ch 1, | abuseHow can this only have one review? I like it. The one-liners you used for a few days added some good humor. The ending seemed -slightly- hasty/contrived, but still nice overall. It's a great departure from your usual "horror/murder from beginning to end" types. Not that those didn't rock, as well... |
| Ssaethan 2004-02-15 ch 1, | abusePretty good, though the repeating-day plot is getting kind of old to me, probably just me(started with Groundhog Day then it seems every TV series in existance used it as a plot for one episode). I think it could be interesting to have a story about a person where *every* day of their life repeats until it's perfect. |