wow. That was awsome. Very original and unique. Me likey. You should make a series out of it! like one for every element! o

Nice story...it is a very good balance of elegant story telling and character. Super! I wasn't sure that I would end up likeing it because the concept of having a dragon inside sounded silly, but after reading your writing, I was really wrong. Great!
Sticky Elf
p.s. could you check out my story, I would love your opinion...?

Hmm, I tend to feel that dragon inside too.
Great fic, despite being short, there's a pretty good story behind it!

Very original. I like the way it was plotted.