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| Lisa 2005-01-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis was very short (a good kind of short), but made it's point very clearly. The ending really made me think. Great job! |
| Ethelflaed 2004-03-08 ch 1, | abuse(Note to self: Reading this kind of story while listening to weird music isn't a good idea. -_-;;) . I'm afraid I can't help you on the historical aspect very much; my specialty is medieval history, and some American. However... . I saw the connections, except for the one from pride to life. Being in humiliating experiences does not always destroy a person's pride. In fact, it can sometimes enhance it greatly. I.e., the slave rebellions and run aways before the Civil War. . Also, since she's Jewish, she most likely has her God, and her soul. (shrug) Just a thought. . However, let that not detract from the general feeling of liking-ness (ooh, a non-word!) I had for this story. It was powerful and short. . ^_^ . -Ethelflaed- |
| Sarika 2004-02-15 ch 1, | abuseO, I like the way you've written this. I didn't see any spelling \ grammar mistakes but then I'm not one to be paying attention to that anyway... Anyways, this is a rather good, interesting take on how a Jew feels during this terrible time... good job! :o) Um... Don't mean to advertise but I have my own holocaust story "Sincerely Rebekah" if you are interested in reading it. Have a good day and write on! |