|Reviews for Ramblings That Rhyme|
| Amara Ryden 5/8/04 . chapter 1
nice job. )
| Matthew James Current 4/16/04 . chapter 1
Very well done. I like how you tie the theme together at the end. I've been looking through a lot of peoples work lately on FPC, and you are doing very well by comparison. Keep it up, keep writing, keep improving!
| somethingpoeticandmeaningful 2/17/04 . chapter 1
AH. I LOVE THIS POEM SO MUCH. These 'ramblings' sound just really awesome, and the fact that you just wrote them raw makes it even more gorgeous to me. I love raw poetry, when people don't try to push everything into a little square on little retarded lines and they just let themselves go, not caring what it really sounds like or turns out as.
I think this is my favorite poem of yours so far, I love it! I'm gonna PRINT IT OUT and STICK IT ON MY WALL, in my binder, on my mirror, on my foot, on my stuffed monkey...soon, you shall be FAMOUS. I LOVE it, and I love you, really good descriptions or metaphors or whatever, lol, i don't know what their called. I write, but I don't know how o_0.
-Sparky Wanna Raw Poetry!