Wow! Very cute ending! I loved the story! One of my fav, definitely!

There's one thing though...I would've loved to see Annabelle's reaction when her big sister would tell her she'd get married with Matt!

Anyhow, keep up the good work!

I absolutely ADORE Annabelle she's hilarious, seriously! X)

Matt and Melissa are so cute together!^^
And what the hell is wrong with Melissa's mother? Would anyone announce that kind of thing like that, really? She that cruel?

Love it!
I think it's weird you write your story in the present, but it's really interesting anyway. I hope she ends up with Matt! I really do!

Also, it's been a while I wanted to ask you; will you ever try writing a story at the first person instead of third? Sorry if you already did. I know most writers always use what they're most comfortable with, but if you never tried, I think you should give it a shot.

oh **
is he involved with the murder?!
no, matt is supposed to be the
good guy here.

OMG,
** thats harsh-
'you were some cheap mistake'

aww, nice they're happy which is good. great story, cya later.

Another great story!! You do have a talent for writing some very interesting and different romance stories. Just be careful with things like spelling and tense. You're pretty good most of the time, but every now and then there are some spelling mistakes. Don't forget to proof-read.

Once again, a wonderful story. Just wanted to let you know that I've added you to my favourite authors list.

~Silver

Oh My! Great ending.

I Love this story so Far, Issy. great, and I can't wait to read more!! :D

This was a great bitter sweet story. The characters were quite real, but you can improve the story by putting a bit more description and action into the plot. Regardless, I really liked it, and well done for writing such a cute story. Yay to Melissa and Matt! Their so cute, and ya, not too romantic but I suppose its more realistic than overly romantic plots. Cheers.

this is starting to get really good! i'd read more, but i have to log off. luv the story! plz keep going!

oh i love this story! but you have so many grammar and spelling mistakes! and you really need to emphasize more...i dno...like, stop jumping around? but i so loved it! T^T cry cry...lol~later!

Wow that was a great story!

Love it. Love it. Love it.