 fairytale failure 2006-06-25 . chapter 1I actually think this is one of your best poems, although there are so many it can get hard to choose. :P |
 Werecat99 2004-02-21 . chapter 1Angsty, but I liked it.
Good work. |
 Mia 2004-02-15 . chapter 1 I like it! I can't figure out who you're talking bout though. *laughs to self* It's not that imporant. I'm so tired and I can barely see the screen so I'm going to bed. Talk to ya later! |
 E. A. Tetje 2004-02-15 . chapter 1I think you did a good job writing this and it is always good to express your feelings in poetry even if it doesn't do your feelings any justice it helps to ease the pain. Many people have experience similar situations to teh one you describe in this poem. Even though I don't know who you are I will pray that God will send the right person to ease the pain of rejection and to make your life more happy and full |
 confused being99 2004-02-15 . chapter 1woh, i really liked that poem, also very sad though...nice job
thanx for the review
~confused being99~ |
 mizu no kokoro 2004-02-15 . chapter 1i feel somewhat the same way sometimes, though i have no itentions on giving up yet^^ Ha~ good job
~Never the same~ |
 YoungRL 2004-02-15 . chapter 1Aw! I liked how you showed the struggle between the emotions: trying to move on, but still holding on.. You captured it well, good job =) |