thank god. you are so right. bastards need to stop whining.

HAHAHthere we go

I LIKE this. Can't stand all that teenage angst, too. Nice!

ooh, you're a meanie. ;] so am I.
Do you know why people write painful cliche poems? They're looking for the exit. That's all they can do.

Good poem..^^ Hehehe, yeah we do ** alot. Sorry! :)
~*^Decaying Dreams Upon Broken Wings^*~

the last two lines are a poem in itself hahahaha

Well, well, well, look who's back? Nice to see you haven't lost your touch in writing ol' chap.
I couldn't agree with you more in this piece. I couldn't have done any better than this.
Great work. Don't stop. Write more.

Good poem. But I kinda have a bone to pick with you now.
1) Some people's lives ARE that bad. They deserve every right to ** to people. They also deserve every right to be listened to.
2) Poetry is a form of self-expression. Don't take a whiz all over people's feelings.
But, good poem anyway!
~EMQ

I agree with the overall concept, but you do have to realize that a lot of people write to let out emotion, which is better than killing themselves, no matter how annoying it gets to read. I had two problems with this piece. I think 'perhaps you'd like life better' than 'but perhaps...' I Think it just reads better that way. Also you use life two lines in a row and that seemed kinda odd when read. Other than those two things nicely done.