It's good, yet somehow feels unfinished. The opening lines were great.

Aw... how beautiful! Simply beautiful.

Oh, this is lovely. Lovely lovely imagery, good rhyme, nice rythm. Superb. *prints off*

This is a beautiful, well-written poem. Only one suggestion (although not a necessary one...), it might read a little smoother if it read--"All the world bows...". Only a suggestion, and from a not so competent source.

Very nice rhyming scheme. A very beautiful poem. Nice job!

This is certainly very well written and beautifully described.
Very Well Done
Keep Writing!
F.C
check out some of mine I think you may be someone to appreciate them. I hope :¬D