this is really great! you write so vividly, and use such colourful metaphors. (also, thank you for my review, it was really nice!)

Wow... VERY GOOD! I LOVED the words you used in this one! This was one of your very best!

Great poem. I really liked the flow of the words you used to picture your emotional outpour. It really brings the inner bottled-up feelings to view of such drama. This poem really got to me of how life can really screw things over and cause such pain. Great job on this poem, keep it up!

I like it, but not at the same time, Its not like I felt good about doing it.

*hugs* awesome poem, as usual. your emotions are described so well. feel better! do it! ...please?

Wow... This was just... wow. Nothing short of amazing...

i like it! good job!