Ooh, so pretty. Definately a new favorite.But, about the last two lines... they don't seem to flow as well as the rest of the poem?Just a thought.Otherwise, it's really good!

So very sad. I'm not usually one for rhymes, but I like the way you use them.

sorry I took so log to leave a review...
Wow...so sad, and prety and short and special. Leaving it short and simple was good, it really makes it so much better. I liked this one! Lots of fealings crammed into 8 wonderful lines. Sad.
-Amberose

That was really good! So sad and poignant