I love it!

I like, I like alot! Good old imagery (guess Sophia might have taught us something after all...or not :P). Is it about anyone in particular, or just one of those abstract poems that pop out of nowhere?
Anyway, when are we going to start writing that story, huh? I command Odin to strike you with a lightning bolt of inspiration! (and I guess I wouldn't mind a couple of sparks myself :D)

This is pretty neat =] The rhythm is nice; I like that you didn't make it rhyme, it works well as it is =D

Hey your peom is awesome,Haley