I would most appreciate it if you would take this down. Immediately. Right. **. Now. You want to know why? Because despite your mushy little author's note, you don't mean it. Not one goddamn word. And seeing as the oh-so-holy Bible teaches us not to lie, such a thing as this should not be up on fictionpress. You and the rest of the world can rot in Hades.

I love your poetry. To me this poem makes a lot of sense because I had porblems with my friends recently.
Its absolutly beautiful the way you've worded it and stuff.

Oh my God! This song is incredible. I could just feel the emotion pouring out of the song as I read it. Your writing is fantastic! Very descriptive. Thanks for reviewing my songs, BTW! I appreciate it.
Steve

That's really a beautiful poem...i felt honored just getting to read it...

wow girl. this is amazing!! and i can tell that it's from your heart. you have a true gift for writing, you honestly do. and don't ever let anyone take that gift from you. or anything. keep writing girl!
luv,
weezer

ohmygosh... it's so sad... and heartfelt. It's such a powerful poem; even afterwards, the words are tearing at your heart...

That was beautiful. For a change, I cannot relate to this poem-- I hope you do not lose your friend. Take Care.
Regina O.B.

On the one hand, the small, mutilated, deformed hand that is constantly trying to kill me in my sleep, yes I was born with a strange hand but that is not the point, this sounds like you care more about the loss of your friend in your own life rather than the loss of their life. On the other hand, my non-traitorous hand which writes such evil comments (back, back you evil creation!), this is AMAZING! SPECTACULAR! BEAUTIFUL! You might have been crying while writing, but I'm sobbing because FINALLY! A good writer in the world! Thank you oh ** THANK YOU FOR EXISTING! Your poor friend, whats wrong with her? or him?

Truly beautiful. Made tears well up in my eyes. :*( Tomorrow will be a better day

That was really amazing. I know how hard it is to deal with a friend like that. Always remember that it's not your fault! You can only do so much. I really hope you and your friend are okay! Beautiful poem!

thats very nice. Its a letter people need to read when they are feeling down.