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| pneumothorax 2005-04-29 ch 1, | abuseNice start. Amy is annoying. |
| PirateGrrl 2005-04-08 ch 1, | abuse(I'm reviewing, dammit) Hey! Where's the next chapter?! I really like it so far. Nathen is kind of meek though. He needs to just scream at Amy and tell her "WE'RE THROUGH!" Maybe then she'll get it through her head. Tyler sounds adorable. "Really good friends" indeed. hahaha! Continue, dammit! :D:D:D:D:D |
| Switch 2005-03-17 ch 1, | abuseNEXT CHAPTER! pleasepleaseplease! |
| Rouge 2005-03-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseNow that you've finished Games, perhaps you'll be able to, say, update this story? |
| Lily 2004-11-03 ch 1, anon. | abusePlease!I beg you!write the next chapter fast, because the beginning sounds great and I wanna know more about Nathen...and Tyler of course!;) |
| CRButter 2004-08-04 ch 1, | abuseYes...continuation is a must. *clings to story* I adore it and and and...well yeah. I adore it! ^.^ Actually I've just read through basically all your stories (sadly I forgot that the review button existed *cringe*) and I've gotta tell you that I think you are an amazing writter. Brilliant! So...keep it up! |
| mari 2004-07-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseI agree about the concept of the story. I would greatly apprectiate if you wanted to continue it *nudgenudge* So if you have the time, keep going with this idea! I like it. :) |
| shadowedskies 2004-06-02 ch 1, | abuseYou should definitely continue with this one. You pulled of third person really well if youre at all worried about it i dont see a reason to be. I hope that the two boys will eventually find happiness with eachother at the end but I cant wait to see how it will all lead to it! Ot to put this all in a few words: UPDATE NOW! |
| smellslikerainbows 2004-05-04 ch 1, | abuse"I’m sure we’ll get to be ~really good~ friends.” Hah! What a wonderfully funny line! Tyler's quite the brazen fellow, now isn't he? Ooh, please continue this morsel. |
| da eskimo 2004-05-03 ch 1, | abuse...you know, I already dislike Amy intensely. After just one chapter. Is that supposed to happen? |
| Ree 2004-02-23 ch 1, anon. | abuse*reviews, dammit.* How could I not? This is such a great start, and I can't wait for the rest of it. If you were having problems with 3rd person POV, I totally couldn't tell, because I thought this was WONDERFUL. I really haven't read much of your stuff except for Worrying, but if any of them are half as good as this, I need to investigate! I'm so embarrassed that I haven't looked at more of your stuff sooner. @_@ Please forgive me.. *worships* |
| Sheena 2004-02-22 ch 1, | abuseLoved it. Adored it. I'm gonna love this fic! Just throw in a lime or lemon scene and I'll be even happier!! Love your work, keep doing it! |
| Jeoal 2004-02-21 ch 1, | abuseI can't believe that this only has -two- reviews. It most definitely deserves more. I love the concept of this story, and am eagerly awaiting the next update for it; I want to see what's going to happen between Nathen, Tyler and Amy [well, Nathen and Tyler, really]. I can tell already that it's going to be great. Oh yes, please update 'Games Make the World Go Round' soon, too, yeah? ;-) |
| Dark Pegasus 2004-02-20 ch 1, | abuseI like it. You should continue. Don't forget to review my stories. I've been doing quite a bit of work lately. |
| Pundit 2004-02-16 ch 1, | abuseThis sounds *very* promising! I'm definitely looking forward to the next chapter (of this and "Games Make the World Go Round") So PLEASE let there be another chapter to this! It sounds really interesting! And btw, you used 3rd person POV wonderfully! Anyway, UPDATE SOON! Thanks for posting!! ^_^ |