Hey, uh, it's that guy who hated that other song of yours- yeah I feel kind of bad about that outburst now so I apologize, you can say that if you want to. Ironically that's the beauty of America, no intentions to insult you. And although I don't like it you and your song wasn't really what got me angry, it was that person who says he's not patriotic ever since the war in Iraq. Anyway I don't want to get into that big thing right now since I should be reviewing your poem. About the poem this is actually really good, it flows really well and everything.
BTW I'm underage too, what does your parents controling you have to do with America? Would you rather have the government controlling you?
Anyway once again I apologize.
Signed,
McGruff the Crime Fighting Dog- I mean Jeffo32
OH I'M SO CHANGING MY USERNAME TO THAT!
sorry, sorry...

good description!

It reminds me of the riddle from the hobbit, but much, much better. Seriously. You have all these short poems that are SO GREAT! All my poems turn out much longer than I wanted them to be . . .

Gasp! I'm not the first to read this!
Nice job. Time really is a great thing, though when your as old as I am (LOL) it goes by like that.
But then again you are just a mortal...
~LG~

I never thought of time like that, I love it.
Thanks for your reviews, and for the heads up on the spelling mishap. oops? lol.
Keep writing,
Rebecca

Beautifully done! Excellent!

Marvelous! I really loved the line, "It soars swiftly on wings of angels". Excellent piece, keep up the great work. :o)

nice piece. i like this, very true. beautiful imagery you use here also. great job!

I like this. You have obviously put some serious time and thought into this, and leaves me with some interesting thoughts about time too. It flows nicely too.. Great work!

I like it, I find it to be quite interesting. :)