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| Chris-no-Baka 2007-04-19 ch 1,  | abusethe mos improtant thng i have to say is aw! this story is just what i needed to bring me out of my melodramatic, un-nessesarily depressed state. *hug* Anthony reminds me of me so much, cept is parents know he's gay and mine either don't or chose to ignore it. I kinda wanna know what happens to roger though. Do he and Anthony and Cody ever make peace? |
| Densetsu No Yume (okay, so ... 2004-04-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow. Wow. Wow. I cannot say it enough. This grabbed me and held me tight and brought the teary feeling to my eyes without letting me cry. It was beautiful. I don't know why, it just was. Some of my favourite lines: "...Anthony was a chattering bumblebee, full of movement and emotion and never mind what people think as long feeling never stops." "When the moon's sparkle finally went in search of another young couple's eyes..." Really, your wording is unique and left me misty-eyed and wanting more. Cody and Anthony are strikingly real and simple, yet endearing. This piece brought out the value of the little things: popcorn fights, the Beastie Boys, jumping on the bed, one in the morning. In this story, I was seized by a feeling that can never come often enough. I can't thank you enough for writing this. ~ Yumeko Indou |
| Anna 2004-02-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseHey, girlfriend! Love it! Go penguin, go! Whoop there it is, whoop there it is... |
| Rogue_Lei 2004-02-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery nice, i loved the way you told the personalty out. I have to say its better than anything i wrote ^.^ |
| Manda 2004-02-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseI think this was a really well written short story. I loved the way the characters were developed and how you knew just enough to capture your interest and keep reading. |
| FamousOneLiners 2004-02-17 ch 1, | abuseA sweet story |