sort of an interesting story...but the longness of it spoil it, sort of makimg it plain and dull. by making it shorter helps to make it more interesting. it is quite alright, though...

The relationship between Dante and Dove is unrealistic because angles and demons don't fall in love with each other. Its in the bible. Are you a Mormon?

Well witten and really goo plot. But I don't like it all that much. It's good. But was also boring. O__O Didn't mean to bum ya out.

~ Noelle ~

OMG I JUST MADE A REVIEW AND THEN IT DELETED ON ME. fiction press SHOULD die. i back you up 100%. Lets make petitions. anyways...lovely lovely little story. it had me hooked. but the ending was sort of a drag...even if its just a chapter...is it? keep up the fabulish work!
~the unknown dork~

As always, you're still good at shooting my works to hell with critiques "shakes head and chuckles". I don't care if you igonore the epilogue. You still reviewed it (lol), so thank you so much for that.
As for this piece, well, what can I say? It's good.
Although I assume that this line "John smiled and said, “Of course, of course. Let be grab my wallet.”" meant "Let me grab my wallet." ?