Falling in love.. Yes, your poem and esp. the last lines clearly give us the truth about falling in love.. ;D

But, well, as much as it is dangerous, it is undeniable... Let's just make sure that the pit that we are falling into is not that deep; we might not be able to redeem ourselves if it's with no bottom...

Once again, keep it up! Nice job!

That's a really good question. Falling isn't good at all. I like the way you take such a paradoxial saying and question it. Keep writing!Phoenix

laughs quietly Well, I'm amused. D This made my day. Something so wonderfully simple that it can reach my mind in my current half-asleep and half-dead state, and not only that- makes me laugh as well! Very neat.

O I like this one alot. Very well written and nice flow, makes you wonder lol. Good job.
Valerie

thats so original...and true. love can be just as hellish as it is wonderful

_ I love it!

Wow, you really have poetry built into you, lucky one you are. I hope one day I may ascend to the heights of making one of your lists, but that remains a dream, i guess I have to write somthing truly amazing. I will read all of the ones you recommened to me ( I must apologise for my spelling, this thing needs a checker, lol.) You are right it is simple but it does raise a good point for belivers, I myself may not belive but in the religious originated society we live inI guess I can extend myself to understand what is being said.

Whoa. Your thoughts are so interesting. And not only that, they rhyme! ;p Wonderful writing, keep it up.

this was so cool. I love the snatches of thought you present in your work, they tend to stick with me more than some poetry.
mezzie

Very nice. Interesting and an awesome poem.
*lime-girl*

Short but loved it.

this is an interesting concept, we probably don't rise to love since rising is sort of like coming above something and falling is just something that happens. where we go depends on where our heart is at the time. a great poem, made me think a bit. also well written.

... Hell is below.. when we fall in love, where do we go?
Amazing. I love this. Just... wow.

Beautiful. I can relate.

I really like how you pick up little things and right about them!