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| SunnyXD 2007-08-05 ch 7, anon. | abuseUpdate please its a great story and is probaly one the my first stories I read on fictionpress and would really like to see it completed. |
| sunflowersing 2007-05-09 ch 1,  | abuseThat was REALLY good! sunflowersing |
| Dawn 2004-12-20 ch 6, anon. | abuseSome parts of this are not quite right, so you will need to rewrite for accuracy. Other than that, your story is coming along well. The next chapters should be quite hot! |
| Ripose 2004-06-01 ch 5, anon. | abuseWow this is simply an amazing story. Your portrayal of the characters emotions are so life-like it's simply stunning. And the progression of the plot is kept at just the right pace to hold any readers curiosity. Keep up the excellent writing! |
| Lady Zee 2004-05-01 ch 4, | abusegreat story,this is getting really sad...will he end up with sara or mary? i hope sara will get her heart's wish...update soon |
| zagato 2004-04-19 ch 4, | abusecool update. please write more. |
| zagato 2004-03-11 ch 1, | abuseCool story. Got to read more. |
| Ti 2004-02-27 ch 3, anon. | abusei like i like! more soon please! -THE RANDOM CRITIC- |
| Geri 2004-02-25 ch 3, anon. | abuseGreat story, hope you update soon! |
| Islandgyal2004 2004-02-21 ch 3, | abuseGreat story keep it up. |
| Brandi 2004-02-17 ch 2, anon. | abuseWow. Can I leave it at that? I love your writing, it's that simple. |
| Ti 2004-02-17 ch 2, anon. | abuseplease continue with this... and would u email me when u update? my addy is Dark_Princess786@msn.com thanx! -THE RANDOM CRITIC- |