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| Thorn's-girl 2005-08-19 ch 3,   | Ecellent, excellent work. I have no idea how you do it, but you have a gift for drawing the reader in and not letting go, apart from your talent as a writer. Bueatifully done. I love the chracters, too, something you also do well. |
| Finger Dingbat 2005-04-08 ch 3, | ba ba ba ba ba ba i'am loving it! |
| pinkfluffyoranges 2005-04-07 ch 3, | aw man we all need a van...the perfcet man van *giggles* im tottaly not with it 2day |
| Marissa 2004-09-10 ch 3, | I first read you stroy Belmont, my friend had told me its was a good story, So i then decided to youknow read some more.. i was wondering if you were going to write more of this story? I would really like it if you did but, yea know, you don't have to, duh. |
| Midnight Owl 2004-06-25 ch 3, | it's so sad that you haven't updated this in so long. it's amazing. i hope that you do continue it... |
| holymike n ikes 2004-05-26 ch 1, | PLEASE UPDATE |
| Liebe Sasa 2004-05-14 ch 3, | Lovely, lovely writing as always, doru. Update soon, or at least when you can, won't you? ~Sasa |
| freedman121 2004-05-12 ch 3, | Written well... good job! Freedman |
| eug 2004-05-12 ch 3, | more fanservice! okay, so this isn't a manga... focus, focus, focus... let's see. more description, or more detail would've been better, imo. but still HOT SEX ON A PLATTER |
| FAKE?romances 2004-05-12 ch 3, | wow WOW wow WOW wow! i completely and totally loved this chapter. i really, really love this story. that's just about all i can say...but yes. it was absolutely wonderful. |
| InkPoisoning 2004-03-16 ch 2, | Really good. Can't wait for more. Ta ta for now. |
| Lady Nemo 2004-02-24 ch 1, | ::giggles:: so lovely. Do you know people like this too? Oh, the moody drug-addicted poets of society. It's legacy the french revolution passed down to us, in my opinion. I love it, positively love it. If this story is based on your true experiences, then we have a lot in common. You should read and reveiw Wounded, under Lady Nemo, I think you'd appreciate it. Based on true life. Intense, vivid, pained, drug addicted, and thoughtful. Keep writing, you really drew me in. You're a good writer. -Lady No-One |
| eug 2004-02-21 ch 2, | -_- u never even told me u made more updates.. :'( glad to finally see you're near dabbling into complete homosexuality.. ;รพ as i'm sure two HOT guys doing it would probably get you all weirded up... lol |
| freedman121 2004-02-19 ch 2, | What is UP with that? Well, update soon. Freedman |
| californiaone 2004-02-19 ch 2, | again, this looks really interesting.I don't know, you just have a way of writing that makes you want to read more. update soon ~*~*~*~ |