Sounds like it is going to be a good story.

good first chapter. i'm hooked. you have to update soon. eagle eyes of danny jackson...that makes him sound kinda creepy. update!
panther

"eagle eyes of Danny Jackson" doesn't sound good. wesley seems ok, but danny may turn out to be some kind of psycho guy. neways great story, gotta run
btw i updated my story so pls have a look. Update soon!
HeavenLeigh xx

Love ur story! It's different, and it has a "southern" style to it. You're very creative. :-)

I should be doing my homework now, but the story caught my attention and at first I was going to read just a couple of paragraphs, but I got hooked. The first chapter was very interesting (sp? I can't spell, hell, you've read my stories) and I am seriously interested (crap) to find out more. No , lol.