Hi,
First thx for your review... i like this a poem a lot- it takes the same idea as "words" but makes it far more poetical lol. I love the idea of blood decaying- a very potent image. Short as this may be it is of great quality, well done,
McD

Hey lady! ;) Where have ya been? Add me if you have yahoo or add me on MSN black_balloon_flo@hotmail.com anyhos! It's amazing what you can make out of one little idea huh? I like the use of carbon paper -sigh- but it's a dramatic poem -wipes tears- nice job.
Jenna xx

i just love your work.How do you make the smallest observation into such a beautifuly flowing image?
~Nat TUD

I left the overall comment on your tagboard, but I have to say this one is a good write. Though one cannot deny your talents as a writer even though there are views that I will openly disagree with.