Very interesting concept. Nice and original too. Thoughts like that always come to me in lesson. Then they get interrupted. *sighs*

Hehe- nifty.
I like where you divided the stanzas; that worked well.

Likes it muchly I do.

Lol, I like this poem. Especially the last 3 lines really make you think. Good job!

a bit different than what you normally do, but it is nifty nonetheless. I like it. the ending is a bit abrupt, but I like the way you gloss over 2 billion years, making it seem like its a miniscule amount of time.

Honestly, Ilove it. It makes sense, but its still a little off. Good job!