I know this was updated years ago and don't know if your are ever gonna finish it but I really hope you do because I am enjoying this very mch.

The relationship between Addi and Tyler is really weird. It doesn't feel like they are a couple at all, I wish they would sort out their differences.

I don't like Malachi or Sam as they pose a threat to both Tyler and Addi. Addi seemed to be in love with Tyler at the beginning and admitted it to himself but as your chapters went on I wasn't sure if he still loves Tyler like he used to as he can't tell Tyler he loves him too or he ever thinks about Tyler anymore. Yeah, I know he has a lot on his mind at the moment what with finding he has new secret family and sorting his bills and juggling school and social life, I just wish I knew if he will end up with Tyler in the end or not because at the moment it seems its not likely. I so hope they end up together as they make a sweet couple.

Please finish this story and make me a happy bunny :)

OMG NO YOU CAN”T END IT THERE! IT”S SO AMAZING! Keep going!! PLEASE!!

Quote Addison chapter 1:

"I only stood 5'3”, I was 91 pounds, and I was mostly seen wearing thick pink or black eyeshadow."

Quote chapter 2:

"And that was when he stood up and walked toward me, his eyes sharply looking into mine. “How tall are you?”

“Five seven. You?”

He grinned. “I’m short.”

“I noticed.”

“Yeah. I’m only five-three.” The look in his eyes told me he didn’t know why he had just waked up to me, and he looked down at his palms, before picking up a book that lay on the table just to my left."

I don't know if you noticed this already but I just thought I should let you know anyway.

i love you, and if you weren't gay, i think we would have babies. you are such an amazing writer.

by the way, UPDATE.

I don't like Malachi.
I really really don't.
I don't trust him.
I don't trust Ty around him.
I don't trust anything about it.
And it scares me.

He needs to say I Love You back to Ty.
And there needs to be a decision made soon.
I know Tya and Addi are together, but Ty now has this gorgeous guy from his past and they flirt CONSTANTLY and it makes me angry, and Addi has this Sam character.
We need a decision.
I can't handle all this flirting and **.
lol
I have a boyfriend, and I don't flirt with other guys.
My boyfriend would be **.
I can just see it now.
"I WILL NOT HAVE MY BOYFRIEND SHAMELESSLY FLIRTING WITH OTHER GUYS RIGHT INFRONT OF ME!"
Gays may have very active sex lives, but we don't stand for cheaters.
And in most books, flirting is just pre-cheating.
Setting up for a bad situation.
lol
So...choices need to be made.
Addi and Ty.
Addi and Sam?
Ty and Mali?
Sam and Mali?
lol

Choose.
And stop with the flirting.

AND SHOW A LITTLE OMRE OF THEIR RELATIONSHIP.
We don't see like...any of it.
:[

xoxoxo,
Ty

amazing book./
love you.

xoxoxo,
Ty

This is such an interesting story. A little weird, a little crazy, but that's what makes it awesome. =D But I love it. Update soon.

plz make more -_- chapters!! this one was really good! bty ( meaning by the way! )

REALLY REALLY god! LUVED IT!

really good at frist it was sad then it got good again!! :( :) u mind makeing more! - cries- i'm almost chapter 14 >_

really good!

:(

that's so sweet :( MAKE MORE CHAPTERS IBEG OF U!

wow that's so sad :(

Really good!