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| aquamoon222 2005-02-14 ch 1,  | abuseI think it IS very good. The ending was so funny! I really like this! It had a lot of lost hope inside of the words. very nice |
| Ashleigh 2005-01-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseI liked this poem for a few reasons. one was because the words just seemed to flow. another, was that it was basically true. Society has "put the world in a belljar" if you know what i mean. happiness has just about left this world. kinda sad if you really think about it. anyway, great poem. i like it a lot. |
| sa7 2004-05-14 ch 1, | abuseWOW! I really like this! It's so true ... I like how the words flow together just right. Like lots of people have said ... been there, done that Favorite part - Remember when we were happy Not living in this lie Remembering who we really are That’s funny, ‘cause neither can I It's like your reading my mind or something Reading more of your stuff .. really good! ( Please R + R mine!! ) |
| individualiti 2004-04-02 ch 1, | abusei obviously speak on all of us who have read and/or reviewed this amazing poem wen i say that i can totally relate. Whether its referring to sisterhood, brotherhood, *friendship*, or love, this is a magnificent poem that i will definitely add to my favorites list. please read and/or review my poem as well i am a new writer (just started yesterday) and please i am dying 2 read more of ur stuff |
| Psychotic Deviance 2004-03-30 ch 1, | abuseAwesome Poem! Nice ending, surprising, Good job :) |
| Not so Average 2004-02-18 ch 1, | abuseIt's amazing you haven't gotten more reviews, I completely love this. I can relate. I'm adding you to my favorite author's list. |
| catalysis 2004-02-18 ch 1, | abusewow...I really liked it. In a way I can refer it to my life, and I understand what you're saying. Neway, it was awesome. |