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| lilphotographer11 2006-02-25 ch 1, | this rocks! like... a lot!! I love the use of "ye olden language"... :) I like. |
| Layne R. Pendragon 2004-04-11 ch 1, | ... ... ... ... I bow in your presence of talented poetry. *Bows deeply.* ~*~_Layne, Daughter of Flames_~*~ |
| Weapon 2004-03-28 ch 1, | Actually, I'm presbyterian. Go figure, eh? |
| Fenriswolf 2004-03-27 ch 1, | Interesting...I noticed that your bios mentioned your interest in Zen Catholicism. It really shows in the poem. Highly descriptive. It makes me thinks of Gregorian monks chanting to classic rock (don't ask me why.) |
| Lunar Wulf Gemini 2004-02-23 ch 1, | This is good... very well written... |
| Crelian2202 2004-02-17 ch 1, | Very nicely writen. I didn't notice anything at all wrong with it, Great job. |