Yikes; **, that was freaky. Good job! (Yes, I know I'm getting repetetive, but you *are* very good.)

That was a pretty kick ** short story. Do you have any longer ones? I just submitted a story myeself(Not yet Complete). I am pretty new to the area but so far you have the best story I've read yet. Very good on descriptions and suspense.

holy **, ur good!
i like these, straight 2 the point, but nicly written. not 2 short, not 2 long.
im off 2 read more of ur work. =D