Knowing the story beind this I think that I can relate to it more then others.D.

Intriguing and well written with some lovely imagery.
I particularly like. Savoury, like an Italian dish meant to please. (Wonderful!)
Very Well Done
Keep Writing!
F.C

i don't wanna sound cheesy, but o well. but that was trully romantic. don't stop writing.

Definitely a very interesting poem. Very well done.
- Daisuke Yamasaki