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| Eve Martinez 2004-03-09 ch 2, | abuseI really dig this story. It seems to be going somewhere interesting. |
| fynley 2004-03-08 ch 2, | abuse"running like a lopsided llama"...that's such a great line. i like where this story is going and shaun makes me smile. keep it up. |
| I'm a sucker for love stori... 2004-03-08 ch 2, anon. | abuseActually, the term 'bob' is more commonly used by NEDS (see my stories for references), but I suppose we Scots do use it once every blue moon. There was one the other night did you see it? Okay, bit too random. Anyway, I like your story, but it seems that Shaun is a bit TOO egotistical and arrogant, no offence. Maybe this new singer will get him to decrease his -ness of all the above. Please continue soon. |
| fontanellemonster 2004-02-18 ch 1, | abuseThat's a parody kinda thing, no? It was a pretty good parody...I was all primed to give you a long lecture about Mary-Sueism until I actually read it. Mary-Sues can't spell so this has to be a parody cause the grammar's perfect... MM Zane... |