I know it a short story, but it calls to mind more questions then it solves. I like the detail, and the tone very much, but it crys out for the conclusion which explains it all.

Very well written and qiite frightening really because you know that this kind of stuff has happened.p.s i absolutely adore cello concertosShostakovich Rocks!

Not bad, not bad at all. It is my kind of story. I think however, and it is just my humble opinion, that you should add a little more. I would like to know if she gets her revenge, and if it is a sweet as she thinks it will be.

Nice, but rather a cliff hanger. It would be nice to know exactly how it ends. If her "revenge" works, how she copes with the aftermath of having hurt people if it does and the like.