This was for a class? Hell you should try and get this one published. It is that good, not bad for your first attempt at a gothic horror tale. I have written a few of these in my time, and devoted my life to writing this genre. You have a lot of talent in this genre -- ditch writing fanfiction, this is proof that you can write this genre.

Wow! i liked it! sry it's late for me to be on the net! but it was very good!