Wow I loved this short story! I finished it but I had to go back to chap. 21 cause i really liked the whole certain thing for each year of the 7 years bad luck:

One for sorrow, Two for joy...

What a nice story. Yeah, I know, it's been more than a year since you've finished this story but I like it anyway

nice story. It's really interesting. keep writing!

Nice story really kewl.You should add more chapters.Check out my story
Story: MIxed up Love
Penname: charlottegurl988

thats a realli clever story! umm. jus wondering if ur making a sequal. ya no.. bout 7 years later or sumthin.. that would be so cool!! and if u do.. good luck!

whoa.. talk bout bad luck... i hope everything turns out okay... meanwhile.. on to the next chapter!

I'll just put the rest of the reviews for the other chapters in this one. If this is the end then I guess it was a pretty cool story. Good Job.
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What's up with the little girl?? Just wondering.
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I like the paragraph at the end that was funny.
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Interesting how she just left Will. That was sorta funny. Sorry I haven't been reviewing, I was on Vacation. Good chapter though, have to go catch up on everything now!
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That was a very very very good story! Omgosh I loved it! (me being a clutz and always thinking im cursed) Soo it was fun reading bout someone who had it worse ( and better in a way) then me. Good job! Please do a sequal I'll definatly read it!

To cool, contenue.

"On the record I am embracing the fact that I have a father. I am not embracing him or who he is."
How true.

O_O I thought it was over, but hey, who am I to complain when a good story is continuing?

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